Tuesday, November 21, 2006

Empty place


Title: Empty place

1. EXT. TRAIN STATION. DAY

In a very busy train station, many trains come and go, except for one. [fast forwarded images] People slowly start to go in that train.

2. INT. TRAIN. DAY.

People come into the train and seat next to each other. They notice the other people sitting next and in front of them. There is only one empty seat left.

3. EXT. TRAIN STATION. DAY.

DANIELLE rushes to buy the train ticket.

DANIELLE

Hello Sir!

May I have a ticket to the last train to whatever-land, please?

TICKET SALESMAN

You’re lucky miss! This is the last one available.

DANIELLE runs to the train and she gets it right on time. The horn is heard. Train is about to leave.

4. INT. TRAIN. DAY.

JOHN is seating next to the empty seat, wondering if he will travel alone. DANIELLE appears on the screen from the left, and seats on the empty seat. She looks to JOHN. They smile. The train leaves.

[Fade to black]

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